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Title: The Most Wonderful Time Of The Year
[info]redismycolour Challenge: Day One
Date Written: 1/1/09
Rating: PG/K+
Word Count: 783
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None really, but in my head I see it set during/after 02
Warnings: None
Author Notes: Oh, I am so excited about this! *bounce* 31 lovely days of prompts. Inspired by both the picture and the website the picture came from, about holiday shopping in Britain. Massively unbetaed.


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Cardiff Winter Wonderland



"I hate shopping."

Ianto resisted the urge to roll his eyes again. When he'd asked Jack to join him for some post-holiday shopping that morning, he should have known to just drop the subject when the Captain let out a long-suffering sigh. He'd thought Jack was just teasing, making Ianto bribe him with more coffee, then his favorite take-away for lunch, and then promising to take him to dinner after. It wasn't like Jack hadn't pulled the move before, pushing Ianto's buttons until the Welshman was about to strangle his Captain before agreeing to whatever it was Ianto wanted, smirking away the whole time.

"I mean," Jack continued, turning his body sideways as more shoppers brushed past, "you have the Internet. Wonderful 20th Century invention. Amazon even does free shipping."

"I don't know about you, Jack," Ianto shot back over his shoulder, "but I do like to actually see the sky on occasion. Y'know, the sun, blue, clouds, stars, the moon on most nights?"

"But did you have to do this on New Year's Day?" Jack asked.

"Most of the post-Christmas sales have been picked over," Ianto pointed out, "but the shops still have their sales. And yes, I did. If I had put it off any longer, I never would have gotten around to it."

A woman, arms full of presents, bumped into him and gave him a dirty look. Ianto instinctively apologized and stepped out of her way before she began cursing at him.

"Merry Christmas to you too!" Jack called out as she brushed past, waving at her. "Goodwill to men and all that!"

"I am not Retconning half of Cardiff over your antics again," Ianto hissed, grabbing at Jack's hand and pulling him through the crowd.

"See? It's all a bunch of crap," Jack said, letting himself get led around. "Most wonderful time of the year my ass. All it does is stress people out and make them lash out."

"Exhibit A," Ianto muttered under his breath.

"Heard that," Jack groused.

Ianto stopped abruptly and turned to face Jack. "Okay, look, Scrooge. Next time you don't want to do something, for God's sake, just tell me!"

Jack threw his hands up in the air. "Okay, here it goes: Ianto, I hate this time of the year. The shops are crowded, the people are horrid to one another, and everything's too crowded and noisy."

"God, Jack, I love you, but you're so thick sometimes," Ianto swore.

People were staring now, watching the two men act out their little soap opera. Someone from the crowd let out a loud scoff and hurled a slur, and Jack's head swiveled around to try and find who'd said it.

Ianto could sense the danger in the air, and he couldn't remember if Jack had left his Webley at the Hub. He grabbed Jack's hand and hauled him out of the mall.

The sun was just setting as they stalked through the streets of Cardiff, painting the sky overhead gorgeous shades of orange and red, blue and black starting to creep in along the eastern edge of the sky. They didn't speak to each other yet, letting the cold, crisp winter air soothe their fiery tempers. He wasn't even thinking, just moving.

It was a bit of a surprise when he realized he'd led them both to City Hall, the temporary ice rink on the lawn filled with people: couples holding hands as they slid over the ice, mothers and fathers helping little ones find their feet on the blades, children racing each other and laughing when their mates tumbled. Smiles and laughter.

He'd remembered when they opened it eight years ago, when he was in his last year of secondary. His whole family had come, his sister and new brother-in-law, with his mother sitting on the side with his frail, ailing father. He'd brought his nephews here every year when he was on winter break from uni, and Lisa for two holidays off of work. He'd never gotten all that good even with the practice, all wobbly uneasiness and nervous laughter.

And then it hit him. Why Jack hated the holidays. Everyone collectively getting together, making happy memories.

All of Jack's happy memories were bittersweet, honey chased with a little nip of poison.

Ianto looked over at him. "Know how to ice skate?" he asked conversationally.

"Not really," Jack admitted. "I know the mechanics, but gravity likes me a little too much."

"I'm not that good either," Ianto replied, grinning. "Come on, we can catch each other when we fall."

Jack's face split into one of his slow, lovely smiles. "Yes."

Just because the memories were bittersweet didn't mean they should stop making them.

Comments

[info]katestamps wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 12:24 am (UTC)
I'm struck by a sudden urge to skate. (And I'm amused by the fact that I'm reading this while half-watching Andy, because we've got to raise the children right and that means a little Andy occasionally. Ah nostalgia.)

"I am not Retconning half of Cardiff over your antics again," The again just killed me. Poor, long-suffering Ianto.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 12:39 am (UTC)
I think that you were laying in wait, Mommy Kate! *laughs* Happy New Year.

And you know Jack's pulled a shenanigan that required people getting Retconned. I mean, c'mon. It's Jack.
[info]pinkfairy727 wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 12:31 am (UTC)
31 days of Gracie fic? *points to icon*

And you're off to a fabulous start
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 12:38 am (UTC)
Yup! Hopefully. If the muses work.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad that you liked it!
[info]stargazer60 wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 12:33 am (UTC)
Awww.....this is really sweet.

(and I gotta admit, I'm a lot like Jack in this story during the holiday season!)....
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 12:37 am (UTC)
I'm a lot like Jack too -- I work retail, so people act like I'm their servant and take out all their frustrations on me. And I'm also usually really "oh poor baby" around the holidays because I don't generally do much.

Thanks for reading!
[info]et_muse wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 01:22 am (UTC)
Just because the memories were bittersweet didn't mean they should stop making them. - beautiful line.

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with for the next 30 days of these prompts (reading other people's fics just about makes up for how insane I'm sure to drive myself trying to write my own every day)
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:17 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it. (and I love that part too, reading everyone's things)
[info]kagomeshuko wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 01:22 am (UTC)
Okay, read that. Still don't really get the fanfic thing, but decided I should read it based on the first line, 'cause you know, I, too, hate shopping for the most part.

Also, may want to make that say soap opera instead of so opera.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:19 am (UTC)
Thanks for the beta.
[info]teachwriteslash wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 01:29 am (UTC)
Oh my God . . . Ianto shops on New Year's Day. . . so do I... dragged my hungover self to WallyWorld and went to town on Christmas stuff.

I loved this . . . humorous . . . bittersweet . . .lovely
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:12 am (UTC)
*laughs* Yup! Ianto shops on NYD. I hope you got some good deals!
[info]bookwrm89 wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 01:46 am (UTC)
'Kay...I am really identifying with Jack in this one. LOL Holiday shopping drives me insane!
I like the idea of them going ice skating, even though it makes my ankle ache in sympathy (bad skating accident, 2 wks of crutches, 6 mos of physical therapy...)
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:12 am (UTC)
Aw... *rubs ankle* I have weak ankles myself, so no ice skating for Gracies.

Thanks for reading!
[info]luvinthe88and20 wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
Cute fic, I love Jack being a grump and Ianto trying to make him less grumpy.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:11 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it.
[info]totally4ryo wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)
"Merry Christmas to you too!" Jack called out as she brushed past, waving at her. "Goodwill to men and all that!"

Sounds like me. *laughs* Yup, I can identify with Jack. I think it'll be safe to venture near malls again soon.

Awesome. I love it! *hugs*
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 04:25 am (UTC)
I felt like yelling that at some people these past few months...
[info]forrent wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
This was so sweet, I loved it. I can't wait till tomorrow!
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 04:25 am (UTC)
Thank you! And neither can I.
[info]vipersweb wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 03:25 am (UTC)
this is strangely fluffy. I like it. I like Ianto's desire to help Jack make a happy memory.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 04:24 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it.
[info]cjharknessgirl wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 08:20 am (UTC)
Aw, that was bittersweet, funny, and lovely! And I love the thought of them ice skating.

I love to shop when there's sales but have to agree with Jack because people tend to get on my nerves.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 08:03 pm (UTC)
Some days I want to beat people with nearby objects.

Thanks for reading, sweetheart!
[info]hab318princess wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 09:59 am (UTC)
That last line is wonderful wisdom and the fic was brilliant, liked it a lot!
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 08:01 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it.
[info]fide_et_spe wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 04:04 pm (UTC)
I also could relate to that. This time of year I walk about shops, pick things up, look at the queues, then put them back and walk out!

Sweet story, of course the shops are all closed on New Year's day in Britain..
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 08:00 pm (UTC)
*laughs* Of course they are. While here in America, everything's open.

Thanks for reading!
[info]fide_et_spe wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 08:41 pm (UTC)
Yep totally shut, like Christmas day, literally nothing open, except petrol stations, and those little shops. Easter Sunday is the only other total shutdown.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2009 03:07 am (UTC)
*makes a note for future reference* Here, most everything's open. The only real day that things are closed is Christmas Day, but sometimes movie theaters are open, and sometimes certain chain stores like Walgreens with limited operating times.
[info]shiny_starlight wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 09:46 pm (UTC)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *huggles both boys*
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2009 03:05 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading!
[info]wykling wrote:
Jan. 2nd, 2009 11:54 pm (UTC)
the last line was simply brill^^
aww i love reading all the different attempts on the prompts even if should have gone to bed almost two hours ago xD
damn... needs tardis...and doctor ;D
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
You! Bed! It'll still be here when you wake up.

Thanks for reading, sweetheart.
[info]wykling wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2009 11:40 am (UTC)
lol i've recovered more or less now ;D
you're really welcome your entries are fab! :)
[info]gingerlr wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2009 01:47 am (UTC)
we can catch each other when we fall

My favorite line, what a wonderful way of describing their relationship.

I think the challenge is going to be keeping up with all the wonderful fics coming out of this.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 3rd, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
Well, they do! *laughs*

^__^ I love my fandom's monthly challenges!
[info]missthingsplace wrote:
Jan. 4th, 2009 10:48 pm (UTC)
I'm with Jack, anyone that goes shopping on New Years Day should be shot ... hee hee!

(Says she who works in retail and had to work on NYD!)

Love it.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 4th, 2009 11:58 pm (UTC)
WORD on retail. Word. *nods*

Thanks for reading!
[info]forgiveninasong wrote:
Jan. 6th, 2009 12:26 am (UTC)
Aw! Lovely mix of the bittersweet and the...sweet!
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 6th, 2009 03:04 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it.
[info]thrace_adams wrote:
Jan. 6th, 2009 09:49 pm (UTC)
Oh I really liked this. Looked like they were about to get into a HUGE fight and then...the ice skating rink saves the day :)
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 7th, 2009 09:11 am (UTC)
*laughs* Yes, they were. Also, both of them sort of ignored Ianto telling Jack he loved him. Which was a focal point in the original... Stupid muses.
[info]virginhuntress wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2009 08:28 pm (UTC)
The last line is just wonderful, and so, so true.
[info]gracie_musica wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2009 11:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

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